Thank you everyone who participated in Men.com Script Writing Contest #3. From more than 50 scenarios submitted, we’ve picked the top 5 we like the most. Please read these 5 ideas below – Don’s Trying Out the Goods, Brian’s Meritocracy, Dave’s Geek Fuck Fantasy, Pedro’s The Archeologist and Tyler’s The Boy Band and vote for the scenario you like the most.
Please note that the porn stars’ names were used as suggestions and they might be changed when the winning script is made into the real porn scene by MEN.COM. You have time to vote until Friday, June 7th.
1. Trying Out the Goods
It opens with Rocco leading a naked Bobby Clark into a room. Bobby is leashed; his cock is rock hard. Rocco presents his slave to a potential buyer, Dirk Caber, a man of considerable wealth. Dirk is well dressed, casually smoking a pipe and enjoying fine scotch. He is backed by his body guard, either Colby Jansen or Charlie Harding.
Rocco quickly puts Bobby through a demonstration, making the boy suck his cock and take it up the ass. Dirk casually strokes himself, nodding appreciatively while he watches and making requests: a harder thrust, a deeper suck. Being a crafty negotiator, though, Dirk soon declares that Bobby isn’t exactly right for his needs. Rocco demands to know why, so Dirk sends Colby/Charlie over to demonstrate what he likes, first on Rocco and then on Bobby. Colby/Charlie makes the two men suck him and takes turns fucking one then the other, all the while explaining, “This is how Mr. Caber likes it.” He finally tells his boss, “I think they’ve got it.” And Dirk joins in. He and his body guard pound the two men, but Dirk still says, “The boy isn’t exactly what I’m after.” Rocco responds with, “Maybe you’re after this!” He and Bobby force Dirk down and the two of them, along with Colby/Charlie fuck him to completion, each unloading their balls in Dirk’s face. It ends with Dirk saying, “I’ll take him!” Dirk cleans Rocco and Bobby’s spent cocks before he and Rocco seal the deal with a kiss.
2. Geek Fuck Fantasy
Two guys are walking together (sidewalk, could be hallway) discussing mathematics. Both are ‘geeks’ complete with ‘geek’ glasses. (I see Conner Habib and Sebastien Keys in these roles). Following not far behind are two jocks who seem about to goof on them. (I see Connor Maguire and Ryan Rockford in these roles). As they approach the 2 ‘geeks’ they each put an arm around one of them and ask them where they are headed. Conner nervously replies ‘the Library to study’. Ryan then says “Hey! You can help us study.”. Connor says “I think that’s a great idea.”, as they wink knowingly at each other with big grins.
The library is empty except for the librarian (Dale Cooper?) who is also a ‘geek’. He says ‘SHH!!’ to them. The 4 sit at a remote table. Conner whispers in Conner Habib’s ear and motions to the back shelves. He nervously follows and reaching where Connor has stopped, Connor grabs Conner H. and they kiss and tongue like crazy. Conner H. is apprehensive at first but melts and gives in. At the table Ryan keeps staring at Sebastien who is trying to read. He eventually takes away the book, clears the table, grabs Sebastien and puts him up on the table and starts to undo his pants. Sex is going in each area. Eventually the 4 are fucking and sucking each other in a corner and the Librarian sees the action. He grabs his crotch and gives a sultry look, goes and puts the closed sign on the door and locks it. Then goes over to the guys with his hard dick out. He gets to the guys, pulls his pants down and turns around so Ryan can eat his ass. The 5 fuck and suck until the end.
3. The Archeologist
The story begins with an Archeologist who is about to discover Pharaoh Nephertum ´s tomb. The archeologist is accompanied by two guys (labor guys hired for the expedition) . The Archeologist founds the sarcophagus (vertical position), then when he opens it , the Pharaoh open his eyes and his first words are “I´m your King suck my cock”.
The first reaction of the archeologist is to run, but the labor guys are under the spell of the Pharaoh and they hold the Archeologist and put him on his knees in front of Nepherthum´s big cock. After a blowjob, The Pharaoh decides that first the labor guys are going to fuck the Archeologist, when they finish The Pharaoh gives the Archeologist a rough fuck.
Suggested Cast: The Archeologist: Landon Conrad or Robert Van Dame or Colbey Jensen (but he should be bottom). Nephertum Pharaoh: Paddy O´brian or Topher Di Maggio or Spencer Reed. Labor guys: Rafael Alencar or Adam Killian or Marcus Ruhl
4. Meritocracy
Dirk Caber is the boss of a call center and he has three employees: Rocco Reed, Liam Magnuson and Jack King. One day Dirk decides to do an inspection to supervise the work of his subordinates and finds out that one (Rocco Reed) has not arrived to his work place yet. So he asks the other two workers where Rocco is and they tell him that Rocco hasn’t shown up in all the morning. Dirk gets very angry and tells them that when Rocco arrives he must go to his office. Two hours later Rocco finally gets to his work, and his work mates tell him the message of his boss. Rocco asks them why they didn’t make an excuse to justify his absence but they tell him it wasn’t their problem and he should be a better worker. When Rocco goes to see his boss, Dirk already has prepared a notice of dismissal to Rocco. But Rocco asks him another chance to demonstrate that he can be an exceptional worker and after giving a blowjob to his boss, Rocco is not fired and he is promoted instead.
When Dirk and Rocco come out from the office, Dirk announces that Rocco is going to be his new assistant, so Liam and Jack are going to be Rocco’s subordinates. The two guys get very surprised and angry. That night when Rocco is in the parking to go home, they are hidden waiting for him to find out how he got the promotion. They thought that they deserve a promotion more than Rocco. Rocco tells them that everything is due to his merits and they should leave him alone if they want to keep their jobs. His work mates decide to give Rocco a lesson and both fuck him in the car and Rocco gets double penetrated by Liam and Jack. Before leaving they tell Rocco that they quit.
5. The Boy Band
The scene should focus on a boy band of five guys (like One Direction or The Wanted). They could be coming back into their dressing room after a long concert. You can hear the girls screaming outside for them. One of them can bring up the statistic that Lance Bass mentioned that “at least 1 of the five guys in a boy band is gay” and then they can try and figure out which one of them it is. One of the boys is a little more flamboyant than the others, so the other four automatically assume it is him. They have a lot of energy built up and one of them mentions that he really just needs to get off. The others agree and then they say “well we can just use [whichever one is the presumed gay one] to get off”. Then a fuck fest ensues with the presumed gay one as the bottom (he doesn’t want it and actually isn’t the gay one). Once the sex is over, a different guy casually reveals that he was actually the gay one.
The guys should be dressed like a typical boy band (just look at pictures of One Direction, The Wanted, or even Justin Bieber for ideas) and I think it would be really hot if they all kept their shoes on during sex. Boy bands tend to have really nice shoes and I have a fetish for sex where the guys keep their shoes on. I’d recommend Connor Maguire, Vance Crawford, Mike de Marko, Johnny Rapid, Jimmy Johnson, and Kayden Taylor but any combination of guys that weren’t too old or beefy for a boy band would be fine.
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ayankalla says
in The Archeologist the bottom should be landon or marcus or Connor Kline or D.O or phenix saint
Me says
in The Archeologist the bottom should be Robert Van Dame
Mike says
We don’t need these silly “scripts” in porn. Just a bed, one top and one bottom.
adam says
@Mike that’s boring.
billy01 says
I would like some foot fetish… “The Boy Band” sounds good if some one worship for example Johnny Rapid’s feet. 🙂
Willie says
I’m with Mike. Scripts are wastes of money better spent on attracting fresh talent, good cameramen and revealing lighting.
josh says
Who is the cameraman? He is sooo hot even just seeing his head!
QMN says
@josh That cameraman is Johnny Rapid.
manu says
I voted meritocracy for the rocco reed double penetration! even though that will never happen.
Scripts can be good if they are closely related to the way the sex action unfolds and not too fucken stupid.
I like when sexual tension builds up in a scene but I don’t want it to be a “plot” either, you’re not making a movie that just happens to have sex scenes in it.
The last one..citing justing bieber as inspiration..barf
suedee says
johnny rapid so boring 🙁
Devin says
I like #4 (Meritocracy) and #5 (The Boy Band).
I like #4 more though, but didn’t Rocco Reed retire? I think #5 needs some more work, but I think they should do #4 and #5.
bucko0710 says
Manu and I seem to have similar tastes and vote for Meritocracy with Rocco being DP’d!! That would be so fine…after all if Rocco can take Castro’s fat one I’m sure it’s not that much more difficult with two..! I’d have the ending culminate with Rocco getting a facial from his rapists!! Wishful thinking…
ASDF says
I voted for #4.
Script #5 is either written by a teenage girl or a 60 year old pedophile. 🙂
sam says
BORING… do something, piss, foot fetish… double penetration. I would like to sww paul walker feet licked!!!
sxg says
I kind of skimmed through them so I don’t really know what each of them is about lol. But since I saw the 4th one has a DP scene it gets my vote. And 5 didn’t since that cunt Justin Bieber was on there.
Also #3 has too much of a Raiders of the Lost Arse from Raging Stallion feel to it.
I don’t prefer plots in movies, but I don’t mind them as long as they don’t diminish the quality of the actual sex going on. and if you’re gonna go ahead and put a plot in there, don’t half ass it do an acceptable job of it.
Personally I like my movies to have a sort of theme to it rather than a plot, like a suit/work theme. Nothing too excessive like the To The Last Man movies.
alex says
I had a pretty good idea, but didn’t have time to submit it. Maybe next time. By then, hopefully men.com will have put a few more tops in the bottom role — and sexy, masculine tops who can bottom are needed for my scenario. Most of the above scenarios read as typical run-of-the-mill men.com fare. Boy band’s fucking is a hot concept, but most boy bands have decent guys and the twinks are men.com don’t really fit the bill. I voted for the Archeologist — especially if they can get a hot beefy guy to be the guy who gets fucked. I would actually change the script a bit, so that the Pharoah fucks all of the guys invading the tomb and then maybe gets fucked himself by the Pharoah. Has men.com even had a video where every guy bottoms? If not, this should be the first one.
JT says
I like the idea of making porn more like a democracy where everybody gets to vote on how it’s done… We will end up with better porn if that keeps up. It’s when you have 3 companies always telling you what THEY think is hot that porn gets really boring. I say open up the request lines and give the viewers a vote. We might not get gay marriage that way, but goddamit, we will have better porn!
JJ says
I’m disappointed that I didn’t make the cut 🙁
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I’m not turned on by any of the 5 entries.
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Is Rocco still suppose to be in the scene? I thought he has already moved to Raleigh?
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If Rocco is in,I say pick Meritocracy.
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If not,then The Archaeologist.
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I don’t think Rocco will be in.So TA will be it for me!
kevin says
I’m not turned by rocco I just don’t think he’s hot?